My feedback for my first draft of my film, was that I had an excellent variation of shot types and angels, which I did not initially plan for, they were just spontaneous and creative when I was on set and in the zone. I also had feedback that one of my strengths was that my camera manoeuvring was professional and controlled. My improvements are to re- edit my ending to be more dramatic, and to add the missing audio.
The timings where I am going to add things are :
0.37: I will make the boo sound effect more louder and rounder, and then cut to silence to add to the drama.
0.56: I need to include the sound of her mum calling her.
1.41: I need to add a heartbeat sound effect or a pulsing effect, to add intensity on the 360 shot.
3.48: I need to brighten the footage as it is too dark and grainy.
And the I also need to reedit the ending to make it more dramatic and intense to match my genre which is a thriller.
Ellie Bindman A2 Advanced Media Portfolio 